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=EXPOSITION/INCITING INCIDENT= "Lt. Smith report to Captain Nicholson for briefing." said Cadet Robertson. Jack was wondering what his new assignment was as he got out of his chair at the breakfast hall. Jack Smith, an air force Lt. has faught in many engagements. As he enters the captains office in his dress blues it is an enigma to what his assignment will be since he just got out of Desert Storm. Captain Nicholson was a short and very muscular man Captain Nicholson said, " Jack I have a job for you since we are a little short handed with pilots that know what they are doing I am going to need you for this assignment. You are to fly over to Yugoslavia for pictures of the Croatian and Muslim the death camps. I need you because yo are the only one here who I think will not get hit by a missile. One more thing, you are being sent alone, but if your are not back in three days we will send a rescue squad imediately." Jack replied,"Yes sir!" as he shook the captain's hand. Jack's jet was ready and so was he. He situated himself in the cockpit of his jet, solutes the engineer, and takes off. Jack flew for about four hours before he reached main land. Jack was disturbed by the pictures he took. He was all ready to go back home to America Out of nowhere his radar picks-up a missile, but it was to late to dodge it. He pulls the yellow ejection lever and is jolted out of the jet. He opens his parashoot and watches his jet explode into pieces. As he touches down to earth, he detaches his parashoot, folds it up, and throws it in the woods so the Serbian troops wouldn't see it. Jack starts walking through the dense and snow covered woods of Yugoslavia. While walking he spotted by a patrol of Serbian troops. He starts to run and can hear and see the bullets whistle by him and ricoshayed off the rocks and trees. Jack finds a small bush and dives in it. Luckily, his uniform is the same color as the bush. When the troops catch up they do not see him. They look around and then walk away.

WHAT DOES THE JET LOOK LIKE?

YOU NEED TO MAKE SURE YOU HAVE COVERED YOUR INCITING INCIDENT... I AM NOT SURE THAT JUST RECEIVING DIRECT ORDERS AND NOT UNDERSTANDING THE SEVERITY OR THE REASON WHY IS REALLY EXPLAINING IT....

"GUM..."

=RISING ACTION= Jack waits a few minutes to make sure they are gone and then makes his way northeast. He then comes across a village of Croatian troops and civilians. It is a village with small bombed-out farm houses and wide grasy fields with craters and dead crops. He starts walking towards the center when a 9 year old kid runs into him. The kid was in cut up cloths and was about half of Jack's height. "Hi, I am Zoran" "What is your name? "I'm Jack" "You talk funny, where are you from? asked Zoran. "I am American" Jack replied. Zoran was about to say something when a Croation soldier came up to Jack and put a gun to his head. Four others followed. The soldier asked him why he is here. Jack told him that He was sent to take pictures of the death camps and that America is trying to help them. America come to help us! Yeah,Yeah America is coming to help you The soldier hugged Jack but this is interupped by a snipers gun shot. All of a sudden tanks come out of the woods with support of infantry. Zoran get in the house, yelled Jack. Shells from the tanks bombarded the small village before attacking. Luckily for the croations they layed anti-tank mines around the village. The tanks exploded at once. God was on our side said one of the soldiers. All the village people came out of the structures to see what had happened. The soldiers got the wounded in the center of the village to be taken care of. The attack wiped out most of the croations and the Serbs new this. The Serbs sent another attack but this time it was only infantry so the mines would be useless. The Croation soldiers had the village people, including Jack and Zoran, to take the road to theCroation city, Vulkivar. They started up the road when they stopped to watch the battle from a hill. They saw the Serbian troops show no mercy as they slaughtered the surrendering Croations. The people filled with fear and anger, but they had to start moving. The sad convoy of injured and sick Croations were an easy target for patrols of serbians

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