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=Exposition/Inciting Incident= One day my friend Bobbet and I were playing in her front yard. Bobbet is a very nice girl and she likes to have fun. If you meet her, i guarentee that you will love her, she is so active and fun i love her so much. One nice, bright as the sun, saturday morning, Bobbet and I felt very suspicious about something. Suddenly, we hear a strange crying noise. Bobbet and I go on her porch to get a closer hear to what was going on. We went to this one, special window where you can see the kitchen through a doorway. This window allowed toy to see three different rooms in the house. When we look in, we see Bobbet’s mom crying. Me and Bobbet push and shuv through the door to go to her mom and see what was going on. We ask her mo what was wrong, and after a while she finally tells us what really happened… Bobbet’s dad had cancer. We were so scared it was like we just saw the scariest horror movie.

“What?!” Bobbet and I astonishingly asked. “Yes. Unfortunatly.” Bobbet’s mom said said quietly. “This can’t be!” she said almost looking like she was about to cry. “Well it is.” she said with the same look on her face.

Bobbet was as dull as a doornob after she found out the bad news. The way she cried, mad me cry. Her face looked like a tomato about to pop. It was so red. I felt so bad for her. I started crying, we both cried for a long, long time. It felt like so long, I thought the war ended. The smell of the kitchen smelt like burnt potstoes and burnt chilli. Bobbet's mom for got all about the dinner that was still cooking. I could hear the sounds of me, her, and her mom making the sounds that sounds like a baby woken up from a nap.

WHAT DOES BOBBET LOOK LIKE? HOW DOES SHE ACT? WHAT DID THE STRANGE NOISE SOUND LIKE? WAS IT A PIERCING CRY OR JUST A LOUD CRY? WHAT COLOR WAS THE DOORKNOB?

=RISING ACTION= After Bobbet finds out the bad news, it starts too rain cats and dogs. Bobbet’s dad had to go to the hospital because he was very sick. Everyone was very upset because Bobbet’s dad was a very nice person. Bobbet and I go to the hospital together because we want o see her dad, and how he is doing, in there its as colorful as a reainbow and there was a mural on the wall. It was so pretty it was a big rainbow and all different kinds of people where painted on it. When we arrive room, we see Bobbet’s dad lying on something that look like a table but is really a bed. the bed was a whitish, tanish color. When we go in, he is sleeping peacefully. Suddenly, he wakes up and we say hello and start talking about things that are happening back in Florham Park and other things. He falls back asleep and we leave the room as silent as a mouse trying not to make one single sound. We still stayed in the hospital but we closed the door so that Bobbet and I could talk privatly. Everything that we were talking about fell into place. Then I know that I was there for Bobbet when she needed help. I liked to think of it that I was her boat, when she was drowning.

"Do you think he's okay?" Bobbet asked.

"I'm not sure." I responded

"Ugh!" why does this have to be happening to my dad?!" she said loudly.

"Everything happens for a reason." I said quietly.

WHAT DOES THE HOSPITAL LOOK LIKE? WHAT DOES IT SMELL LIKE? WHAT KIND OF PEOPLE ARE THERE BESIDES HER FATHER?

=Climax= After talking with Bobbet outside in the hallway for a long time about her dad, a nurse that had shiny looking hair with no split ends, and a blue shirt on came out of the room and told us that it was best for us to come back at another time.

“No.” Bobbet said loudly.

“Excuse me?” The nurse said quietly.

Poor me, Just standing there without anything to say, barely knowing what is going on. I was thinking "Why is she yelling?!"

“I think we should go Bobbet.” I whispered in her ear.”

“No, my dad is in there and he needs our support Meredith!” Bobbet said looking like she was about to break down crying.

She looked so sad that she probably would have cried a river in the hospital hallway. I felt SO bad for her, I was probably going to start crying a river myself! The nurse was just standing there staring at the floor.

“Listen, there is no bribe on the earth that can make me get out of here.”

“Bobbet, I really think that we should listen to the nurse. She might have a point!”

“Fine, But we are coming back later.” she said.

Walking back to Bobbet’s house was a nightmare. It was dark, it was silent, it was aquard. It was aquard because Bobbet almost cried and none of us talked or anything. It was so dark it was like looking through a black whole. When we finally got to Bobbet’s house after about a half hour, We got pillows and blankets and put on a movie. Suddenly, the phone rang.

“Hello?” Bobbet said.

“Hey sweetie.” Bobbbet’s dad said in a soft voice.

“Daddy?!” she said

“Yeah it’s me” he replied even softer.

“Are you okay?” she asked

“I’m feeling a little better” he replies

“Yay!!!” she said as loud as a construction site.

“I know, well I just wanted to tell you that I am going to be here for a couple more days and then I will probably be coming back home.”

“Okay.”

“Okay. I have to go bye.”

“Bye daddy.” she said one last time.

I knew what they were talking about, I did'nt say anything. I heard their voices, I smelled the pines that were outside. Bobbet smiled. I did too. After that phone call Bobbet and we watched a movie in the family room and fell asleep as quiet as a mouse.

WHAT DOES THE HALLWAY LOOK LIKE? HOW DOES SHE FEEL WHEN SPEAKING TO HER FATHER? WHAT DO THE PINES FROM OUTSIDE LOOK LIKE FROM THE WINDOW?

=Falling Action= 2 days ago; The next morning Bobbet and I woke up to the brightest morning we have ever seen. It was so bright out, you could have gone blind. The sight of the backyard was so fresh and wet. As soon as we woke up, we headed to her room to get ready for the morning. We washed our faced and brushed our teeth, and we got into new clothes. After that, we went to the hospital with Bobbet's mom so that we could pick up her dad. We were all very happy at that time. When we got home, we called all of our family and friends. Bobbet's dad was sleeping in the living room. As I was calling all different people, Bobbet was making a big banner and putting up decorations with Bobbet's dad's favorite colors. Some people on the phone were so happy to hear that Bobbbet's dad lived, they cried. It was so loud that I thought that I was going to go def.

"Hi mom!" I said in a loud voice when I was on the phone with my mom.

"Hey sweetie!" She said back to me.

"He's back home now."

"Oh thats wonderful honey."

"Yeah."

"So now Bobbet wants all the family and friends over for a get-together." I implied,

"Oh, okay, I'll come now." She said

"Okay! Bye."

"Bye."

For the rest of the time, I helped Bobbet decorate. And when my mom came, she helped Bobbet's mom cook some food.

5:00, tons of people started to pour into the house. Some friends of mine and Bobbets came too. We all had a good time.

WHAT KIND OF DAY WAS IT? HOW DID SHE FEEL WAKING UP ON THIS DAY? WHAT DOES HER FATHER LOOK LIKE WHEN HE SLEEPS IN THE LIVING ROOM? WHAT DOES THE LIVING ROOM LOOK LIKE? WHERE IS HE SLEEPING? WHAT ARE HIS FAVORITE COLORS?

=Resolution= After the party, when everyone left Bobbet and I wanted to clean up all the decorations that were left on the floor. Bobbet's dad went up to bed, and it was time for my mom and I to go home. Bobbet and I wanted a couple minutes left to talk to each other out on the porch. The sun was just about to set and and it smelled like the palms in Florida. It was so nice out, I wanted to take a picture and put it in a mueuem. We were truly best friends forever.

"Meres, thanks so much for being here for me." she said

"No problem." I said guickly

Friends will always stand by you.

WHAT KIND OF DECORATIONS WERE THEY? HOW DID HER FATHER WALK UP TO BED? WHAT DID THE SUN LOOK LIKE?