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=EXPOSITION/INCITING INCIDENT=

One shining and calm day I had to wake up early with all my sisters. Abbey had two of her friends over to help us get ready for my parents birthday party. As we all were getting ready my family started to arrive. By the time we started getting ready we were all still really tired but then we started to laugh and get along. The time came to leave the house to get our boat on time and we all left together in the car we were talking about if m outfit was okay to wear and if it wasn’t I would have to change or miss the lunch. We pulled into the parking lot and walked up to the dock. The man that was standing there didn’t say anything and let us on. When we got on the boat my mom said that we were missing someone and we were. My aunt and uncle missed the boat.

=RISING ACTION=

Sorry you missed the boat, my mom said over the phone.

Its fine we will just see you back at your house, my aunt said quietly on the phone.

The sound of the boat told us that we had left the dock. I dance with all my cousins and then went outside on the deck to take pictures of the Statue of Liberty. When I went inside I had a great lunch. After we all ate there were people that put a little show they put on for us and they took my dance to dance with them.