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=Exposition/Inciting Incident=

It was an ordinary bright, sunny cool spring monday morning when me and my brother just woke up. My dad was shopping for breakfast. But then we got in a little struggle over the remote in the living room with my little brother Brian, he is short with blonde hair.

"Gimme the remote Brian" I yelled.

"No I was watching first".screamed Brian.

My arms were so tired from pulling I thought they were going to fall off. So I told him that I would watch in the kitchen. Then when my dad got home he made us breakfast I was stuffed. Then I asked him if he wanted to play catch outside on the hill.When we got out side he sayied I was throughing the ball to high. Then when I told him he had arms as strong as mice arms when it comes to throughing a football, and that is when we got into the fight. He ran in-side to his room slamming the door!

WHAT IS THE SETTING? DO YOU SHARE A ROOM? AS SOON AS YOU GOT UP, YOU GOT INTO A FIGHT? TELL ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN THOSE EVENTS OF WAKING UP AND  WHEN THE FIGHT STARTED. DESCRIBE YOURSELF AND WHAT YOU LOOK LIKE. WHAT DID YOU MAKE FOR BREAKFAST? WHAT DOES THE OUTSIDE LOOK LIKE? ADD SOME MORE DIALOGUE?

=Rising Action=

After that little brawl we had I felt bad about myself, so I went to apoligize to Brian. I walked up to the hollow wooden door knoking on it softly, he didn't open the door but he did listen to what I was saying while laying on the bed,

"Brian" I said softly.

He yelled up to the door "what".

"Can I come in".

"No" he yelled.

"Well I just wanted to apoligize I didn't meen to hurt your feelings".

He didn't answer but I know he heare me. I then sat on the couish thinking about how I treated him. The next day it was once agian a nice spring day, But today wasn't a nice day for me because Brian still wouldn't talk to me. That made me feel even worseabout myself. I felt like rocks came to life, and were hitting me in the chest. He acted like I was nothing to him. Brian spent most of the time he tried to avoid me like a cat to a bath. Hopefully this would all be over by tomarrow, and we would be friends again. The next day I woke up first to ask him if we were friends again he repliaded with a no. I'm he now talking to me at least, and stoped avoiding me. I felt a little better but still I felt that I needed my friend back. So I tried to see if I could win him over with kindness. I did every thing he asked me to do. When the day was almost over, and when every one was sleeping but me I could feel that tomarrow was goning to be back to normal, and I would have my old buddy back by my side.

WHY DID YOU FEEL BAD ABOUT YOURSELF? DID HE SAY ANYTHING TO YOU WHEN YOU TRIED TO GET INTO HIS ROOM? TELL ABOUT THE DAY. WHAT DID YOU DO? DESCRIBE THE SETTINGS. IT APPEARS TO JUMP AROUND HERE; ARE YOUR RISING ACTIONS INDIVIDUAL ROADBLOCKS?

=Climax=

Today was the final day my brother and I were going to be at my dad's house. I also knew that today that I had to have Brian as my friend again. When I relized that it was raining out side I asked Brian if he wanted to play his favorite game. It is when you play foot ball in the pooring rain. It was so much fun especially when I fell in the mud, and Brian called me cool looking chewbacca I could just taste the mud in my mouth. Ten seconds left on the clock, only time for one last play.

WHAT MADE YOU REALIZE THAT BRIAN NEEDED TO BE YOUR FRIEND AGAIN? WHAT DOES YOUR DAD'S HOUSE LOOK LIKE? IS IT IN THE SAME TOWN? TELL ABOUT THE DRIVE OVER TO YOUR FATHER'S HOUSE. WHAT WAS IT LIKE TO PLAY IN THE RAIN. TELL ABOUT THE GAME.

"Go long" yelled Brian.

"I'm on it just through it as far as you can."

I jumped into the air with the rain in my face, and mud in my hair with the ball coming right to me. Three, two, one I grabed my hands on the ball at the last minute touch the muddy ground while we both screaming.

"Touchdown!!!"

It was now time to go home after we cleaned our self's up and got in the car back to our mom's. On the way home I happened to notice a grin on Brian's face, but this time it was a smile I felt like I just turned a page in the book of my life. I had a feeling that I got my best friend back.

TELL ABOUT THE TRIP TO YOUR MOM'S HOUSE.

=Falling Action=

When we got back to my mom's house my brother and I rushed down stairs to see our mom. Then we watched t.v. for a while then we played XBOX, Brain came close to victory by a snipe shot to the head, but I throw a plasma grenade at the last minute.

"Close but, no cigar."

We then decided to go to my neighbor Xavier's house. We watched one of the new movies his dad bought. It was a really hilarious comedy with my favorite actor Adam Sandler. We also played one of my favorite games "Rock Band" bing, bang, boom went that drums as Brian whaled on them with the sticks. Xavier sang as I rocked out on the guitar. Brian and my fingers were throbing like a heart but not as much as Xavier's througt was vibrating.

"Great gig" Xavier saied softly.

"Why are you talking so weird" said Brian.

"It's from singing so much" "I think I lost my foice" Xavier said softly.

We waited for Xavier to regenerate his foice but that wasn't happening to soon so we went home for a good nights rest. We got into bed with the covers over our cold feet, before we did that I quietly tip-toed to his room and whispered to Brian " are we friends again." "Yes, yes we are." We went to bed with good dreams waiting, and a new day waiting for us to meet.

SETTING? DESCRIBE IT. DID YOU WALK TO XAVIER'S HOUSE? WHAT GAME ARE YOU PLAYING? TELL ABOUT WHAT IS HAPPENING HERE. WHAT MADE BRIAN FORGIVE YOU?

=Resolution=

The morning sun arosed over the horizen,

"Go away sun it's not time to walk up" I mumbled to myself.

I finally awoke a half hour later, with my hair all messed up and my eyes barrly open. Brian was watching t.v., and the first thing I heard was that he was watching Scooby-Doo and Scooby said,"geepers creepers". Mom made bacon for us, but for soom reason it tasted oddly strange. I didn't worry about it but I did stp eatting it. About an hour later I got a fever. My fore head was so hot I thought my face was melting. So I had to stay in side for the day. While I was resting in bed Brian helped taking care of me by getting me tylonal and food.

"Brian you don't have to do this" I said softly

"No I feel guilty from when you did things for me with out me asking" said Brian.

"If you could please get me an orange juice." I said softly.

"Sure" said Brian.

"Thank you."

I'm glad we were friends again, and no longer enemies. This is why friends always stand by each other.

WHY DID THE BACON TASTE STRANGE? WHAT MADE YOU FIRST FEEL SICK? HOW DID YOU FEEL WHEN BRIAN HELPED YOU? DESCRIBE YOUR SETTING/SURROUNDINGS.