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Exposition/Inciting Incident

"Hi Bob how are you? I said.

"Good, how are you?"He said back.

"Do you want to go to the carnival today?" I said.

"Yeah the would be fun". Bob replied. And that was how long to convince Bob to go tot the carnival.

Bob and I have been friends since we were in pre-school. Bob had brown eyes and blonde hair, we looked nothing alike but were alike in our personalities. We never got in fights, we always said nice things about each other like "WOW, you did so good on that test, i wish I did as good as you!

"Bob, I remember that you always were complamenting me." I said.

"Yea, I know." said Bob

When we said something that was supposed to be funny but the other person didn't think it was funny they would still laugh so the other person wouldnt feel bad. Usually the jokes were funny. He always had somthing to say, he was never quiet. Thats what I loved about him. I always knew where he was because he always smelled this smell that I alays recognized. It smelled so o good, I loved it.

Bob and I were planning to go to the carnival for a long time, and now were finally going. This carnival wasnt just a regular carnival it had the collest rides that make people feel like they were flying and the rides were so big it felt like you were touching the sky. The carnival always smelt like popcorn and cotton candy, which reminds me of the icecream on the board walk, it was summertime and were in 2nd grade. So Bob and I were lined up to go on the ride, "Wow, this looks like a scary ride,should we go on it?" said Bob.

"Even know it looks scary its probably fun,"I said.

Bob and I went on the ride and we both said at the same time " That was awesome!" Bob and I went on the next ride, this was going to be fun it was called the fire ball. Bob and I were so skinny when we went on it we practially fell off the ride. Were laughing the whole time durring the ride, holding on eachother, but it was fun.

Rising Action

The birds were cherping and the sun was glowing. The air smelt like cotton candy and popcorn. It was like I was in heaven... "Ohhh my gosh! that was a scary ride!!" I said "Yea, I know" said Bob. Bob and were so close to the sun we were about to melt. Bob and I were very scared of the rides now. There were so many and all of them were scary!!! The scarieat part was when we almost fell out. We were so close to falling out. ITS NOT EVEN FUNNY!! We were just sitting there when Bob hit the side of the ride and we were both sliding down. We held on to eachother so we would be fatter. That is what we were doing the whole time. The ride was so fast it felt like we were in a car going 1000 miles per hour. My hair was fling back and I felt like my head had flown off into another ride. That was one of the scariest rides of my life! Climax

"Im going to go get a soda." said Bob

"Okey." I said

I was waiting in line for the next ride as a couple of boys came up to me.There hair was all messed up and they looked like they just got beat up themselves. They looked like 2 peas in a pod, the boys looked exactally the same. They also looked like someold scary, smelly, snotty looking boys and they started asking me weird questions, like "Hi freak, what are you doing?" but i just stood there. They got worse and worse. Calling me names, pushing me and shuving me into the gate going into the ride. I got really mad. Then Bob came back.

"What are you doing to her?"( in a meen voice) said Bob.

"Nothing, why do you ask?" said the meen boys.

"No, you are doing something to her, i just saw you push her!"

"So, why do you care?" the boys said.

"Because im her best friend" said Bob

Bob was standing up for me so well. I was so proud to be his friend. Bob then started pushing them back and saying "stay away from her". Then they finally went away and I was so happy.

"Thank you Bob for doing that for me." I said.

"No problem, I will always stand up for you, your my best friend." Bob said.

Then Bob and I went strolling off into the next ride.

Falling Action

After all that commotion Bob and I went home. After that whole thing with Bob `I felt closer to Bob then ive ever felt, but then we got in a fight over a thing that I dont even know why. It was over the most stupidest thing. When I told him he couldnt have an icepop he gave me the silent treatment.

"Im mad at you bailey" said Bob

"Why." i said

"Because you wont let me have the icepop!" said Bob

"Its just an icepop." I said

BAM!! something had just fell off my moms dresser. Bob had gotten so mad at me that he started pushing and dammiging things on my moms counter. I had gotten to the point where I sent him home. He was getting so annoying. The littlest thing had happened and he made it such a big deal.